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Re: By Sun, By Moon - Chap. 5
Wow so this is what she did to deserve the judgment, by the way there's no 'e' in judgement. Well anyways, I liked the way her thoughts were still frazzled ...
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Re: Time Stands Still Part 3
Time Stands Still By Angel of Death Present Sirens wailed, sounding like cries pouring from the lips of a drunken mother. We were all piled into Uncle Jerry's SUV, me, ...
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Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 7
Hey KJ!!! Well I'm back and I'm still enjoying this story because its so real and your characters are believable. I have no complaints about this chapter because I didn't ...
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Re: School
Whoa I feel like this Summer has gone by like cars on a traffic-less highway. Really, I've been doing nothing but reading and writing well I could've went to some ...
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Re: Time Stands Still
*poke*
Aug 1, 2008 -
Re: A Whisper in the Wind (2 of 4)
Oh Ash, why? I was started to like Adam and then you ripped him away from us? Fantastic!!! Okay I know that expression would sound harsh but in literary context ...
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Re: Time Stands Still Part 2
Time Stands Still By Angel of Death Flashback I felt like a crab in a sea full of kissing fish. Everyone was at the carnival with someone. My best friend, ...
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Re: So its July...
Yeah I am soooo excited about NaNo because this is my first time and I already set aside a plot.
Jul 31, 2008 -
Re: A Siren's Ballpoint
Bravo Kylan!! You're really improving on your details and descriptions in each part you add to this series. I like this piece mainly because I was wondering what was happening ...
Jul 30, 2008 -
Re: Time Stands Still
I know that I shouldn't be writing anything else but I think this could lead to something. What do you think? Be honest. Time Stands Still By Angel of Death ...
Jul 30, 2008 -
Re: A Siren's Fingerpaint
*cries* Kylan this is a great improvement! Your descriptions and the feel of the whole story is just truly magnificent. What I like about your writing is that you don't ...
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Re: Furby!
Yeah Furbies were the must-haves back then but now they've become extent. I still have mine and its in mint condition. Maybe just maybe, one day they'll be worth millions, ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: The Jane Effect Part 5
The Jane Effect By Angel of Death Part 5: Palatial Gifts Elizabeth doused the cloth in warm water, and brought it to her face. Slowly, she swept it across her ...
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Re: Columbia Mercy Hospital
Annalise Martin I wasn't planning on making friends with anyone because in this world being a doctor is all about saving lives and not making a life for yourself. If ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: By Sun, By Moon - Chap. 4
Bravo!!! I liked this piece very much and I think that this story is going well. I forgot to look up at the top to see what tense this is ...
Jul 28, 2008
